Reflection 2.2

I'm not sure how I feel about this paper. I mean, I know my final draft is much better than the rough draft I've been struggling to write for weeks now, I still believe I could have done better. I think what I have trouble most with is that I have so many ideas about what I want to do with my paper and I don't know how to make it all flow. I find plenty of useful sources that I know will benefit my paper but again, I have a hard time with trying to make it all connect. Hopefully, my paper doesn't appear to be too sporadic, like I think it does.