Reflection 3.2

Overall, I'm more confident in this paper than any of my previously written ones. The revisions I've made to my rough draft mostly dealt with trying to make my argument seem more focused. I changed my topic from homosexuals being able to adopt children to being in support of homosexuality in general and being the should receive the same civil rights. I feel that, although this new change is a lot more broad, I was able to cover most of my points without it seeming like I was going off topic.