Monday, February 7, 2011

Prewriting Essay One

Government should create stricter gun laws. ---> her claim
Was she effective in getting her point across? She had many facts to support her argument don't some seemed to be a bit irrelevant. she was smart to write this article just weeks after the Arizona shooting because it was still fresh in people's minds, which might make them a bit more biased.

"Violence in the media constantly reinforces destructive behavior. The American Academy of Family Physicians reported that 66 percent of television programs contain violence. Instead of portraying realistic violence, these programs tend to associate violence with humor. For example, the popular video game Grand Theft Auto rewards players for murdering law enforcement. Through such an overdose of irresponsible violence in the media, today’s youth are becoming desensitized to the dangers of guns." 


American media seems to be more comfortable with violence than showing sexuality. Opposite in other countries. We have more violence?.... connection.


Uses Chris Rock's credibility to end her article....

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